New Snake Website Opened Up!

[Lizzy001]

MAINLY for cornsnakes but u know.

This is MY site and plz have a look and email me what u think. there is also a thing where u can email me ur fav. colour variatition, and a description which i will post on my site. only 1 per colour so hurry!
Its just been started so dont expect too much!


Http://www.flashbuilder.net/users/lizzy001/


:w :w :w

[Oliverian]

Looks good. I like the layout, but you might want to read over it and check spelling and punctuation. (There are some links that have periods after them, some without) Try not to use messenger slang on websites, such as 'Ur' for 'your' and 'viv' for 'vivarium'. (I know we all know what viv means, but someone new to the hobby might not) Other than that, you're doing great. If the site provider allows you enough room, you should post some pics of your snakes.

[Lisa]

Like Tammy said, spell check. Heck, go one further and do a grammer check too. You can do this by dropping your text into Word or a similar progam and using the tools to fix things up.

The spinning disk up in the top left distracts from the text on the page which is where your main focus should be on. I'd keep animation to a minimum and only for mouse overs/clicks.

The colour scheme is good, as is the layout. Keep plugging away.

[Samba]

Does anyone know of a site where I can redesign my site for free, and allow me to post multiple photos? I don't the AOL site anymore... hehe

[lilyskip]

you should add a description for "anery." Pictures, too! And i agree with the spelling, grammar, punctuation comments.