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03-12-03, 08:13 PM
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This is a toon that I have done for Kawartha Turtle Trauma Centre, and I was wondering if I could get some feed back!
Thanks in advance guys!
Dino
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03-12-03, 08:14 PM
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Its a good drwing, but i dont get the joke;sorry
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03-12-03, 08:16 PM
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His shell is broken!!!
Good cartoon Dino, but you might want to make the cracked shell show a little more.
Great work!
Pixie
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03-12-03, 08:17 PM
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Oh i see it now,
lol, my bad, guess i didnt look hard enough
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03-12-03, 08:18 PM
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Good cartoon Dino, but you might want to make the cracked shell show a little more.
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Yup
Great work though!
Cheers,
Trevor
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03-12-03, 08:22 PM
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Looks good to me. maybe put his leg in a cast or show more of the shell with bandages on it...
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03-12-03, 08:23 PM
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The crack is something I added after, just cause..
If it is associated with the Trauma Centre do you thing it would make more sense?....know what I mean? Posted at there site or in print!
Thanks for the constructive criticism everyone! and your quick replys
Thanks
Dino
P.S. Good Idea Lisa, maybe a couple of bandaids!
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03-12-03, 08:25 PM
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it's great and it works 
awesome toon Dino
Heather
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03-12-03, 08:34 PM
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It's great Dino. Congratulations. But you must make more of the "broken" shell. Or put little arrows lol.
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03-12-03, 08:46 PM
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dino, great cartoon!
i dont think you need to add anything...i think its better if you dont add more cracks...just gonna over do it.
nice work!
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03-12-03, 09:07 PM
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dose any one know eclypseboy
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03-13-03, 01:29 AM
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Thank you very much Dino, it looks great. It will work really well in the Kawartha Turtle Trauma Centre Newsletter. Its exactly what I was looking for. Keep up the great work.
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03-13-03, 01:36 AM
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I like the leg cast idea. But it looks great Dino! I love your drawings!!
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03-13-03, 02:04 AM
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Looks great man. keep it like it is. I think it's awesome. I do like the leg cast idea too but hey it's still awesome either way.
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03-13-03, 07:07 AM
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I'd make a more noticeable crack in the plastron. Depending on the size it is reproduced at, the existing cracks will not be very noticeable.
Great work, though!
Jeff Hathaway
Sciensational Sssnakes!!
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