my care sheet site :D

snake_goth · 01-10-04, 09:56 PM

this is my new site what u think (some of the care sheets arnt that good but its the best i can do at 2am) so here is care sheets R' us

maiden_canada · 01-10-04, 10:09 PM

dude, learn how to spell. on the front page there is atleast 5 spelling mistakes alone. and why is every link just to other caresheets such as the ones from the N.E.R.D website?

also why do you make a site without good caresheets? you can't wait until the next morning to find good ones?

sSNAKESs.com · 01-10-04, 11:10 PM

Hey its coming along nicely!

Great job!

snake_goth · 01-10-04, 11:22 PM

as i sed its now 4am and ive been up since 9am, do u realy think i have time to spell. anny way ime sorting it all up now ok!!!!!!!!!!
thx jefff. just gone finish most of it up now

SaIiLdVaEnR · 01-10-04, 11:27 PM

It hardly takes a large amount of time to spell and make your sentences coherent. Just stop rushing, it isn't like you are writing anything decent on that site anyways. I don't usually like to be mean but when people try to act professional but do it in the utmost half-assed way they don't deserve me biting my tongue.

snake_goth · 01-10-04, 11:28 PM

o and the reson that there links to sites and not me copying the text onto my site is becos of copyright, ill have to send a e-mail to every site asking if i can use there care sheet.

SaIiLdVaEnR · 01-10-04, 11:30 PM

I also hope you have permission by NERD to be making a page that completely relies on THEIR work. Dear God if you are going to take someone elses work then don't pass the site off as your own for all you are doing right now is making a pointless and poorly created middle-man.

krrc · 01-10-04, 11:30 PM

um.. sorry but I have to second that. (talking about SaIiLdVaEnR's first post

) also your web design needs some work, the care sheet button is too small and it's just a blank page with a few words. I know you wanted to show someone but wait untill it's finished. Or at least say it isen't.

SaIiLdVaEnR · 01-10-04, 11:33 PM

Your site is a middle-man, it shows nothing of itself at all because all it is is someone elses work. Why would we choose your site over NERD's site anyways? They can spell, they make good caresheets, they do not rely on others' work. Much unlike yourself.

SaIiLdVaEnR · 01-10-04, 11:37 PM

"wellcome, i started this site due to not being albe to find anny good care shets for snakes or none atall!!!!! so i started this, this site has (soon) a care sheet for lots of snakes that are cept,"

Very professional work. If you are going to advertise for people to come to the site then try to make it respectable and not a copy or make it seem as though written by a recent ESL immigrant or child. The last sentence isn't even finished for god's sake. How long does it take to finish a sentence? Although, it is not like anyone can read it anyways.

krrc · 01-10-04, 11:40 PM

man..... had a bad day?

SaIiLdVaEnR · 01-10-04, 11:44 PM

lol actually no, a pretty good one. Although he did ask what I thought; that opened a can of worms for sure.

RachelS. · 01-10-04, 11:46 PM

Good work... just needs a few little spell checks and I think your best bet is to read some books and some online caresheets. Take the time to create your own in your OWN Words

That way you can actually be recognized for your work, and YOUR Work only

I hope this helps you out. Good luck on the new project!

Remember, DONT rush it

krrc · 01-10-04, 11:48 PM

(sorry I dident know RachelS post got stuck in there)

I agree their was no effort put in what so ever. plus if you cant find good snake caresheets well... I dont wanna know where your head is!

krrc · 01-10-04, 11:50 PM

just one quick usefull tip for you.. take the time to learn HTML. it works so much better than the "site builder" that you used.