need help, with or without?

[Bartman]

With the faded snake or without.

This is the business card I designed. I think its great, although not of any use now :p But soon enough!

#1
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v281/BartmanReptiles/businesscard2copy.jpg
#2
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v281/BartmanReptiles/businesscard.jpg

[clint545]

I like it with the snake

[Lioness]

with..i like it
it give it a little something extra.
good job!

[GekkoGeck0]

I agree, with is more interesting. Gives it a little more character.

[peterm15]

i think you should matbe make the faded snake a little less faded and keep the numbers in the middle... the snake would be more like a backround image than a focal point... also maybe move it over slightly to make less of a blank area under the phone number...

now if your useing this as an advertiseing technique maybe go for the faded snake but if you plan on sending a TON out at shows and stuff you might be better off with the second design... this is soaly based on cost..

but either way i like both of them... very creative

[Asian Jon]

Looking good! Good work Adam. Faded looks better IMO.

[Bartman]

i think you should matbe make the faded snake a little less faded and keep the numbers in the middle... the snake would be more like a backround image than a focal point... also maybe move it over slightly to make less of a blank area under the phone number...

now if your useing this as an advertiseing technique maybe go for the faded snake but if you plan on sending a TON out at shows and stuff you might be better off with the second design... this is soaly based on cost..

but either way i like both of them... very creative

Thanks, I changed it around similar to what you said. What do you think?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v281/BartmanReptiles/businesscard3copy.jpg

As for cost, im only going to be printing a few at a time, nothing large scale so cost isnt a factor really.

[Asian Jon]

Cool, I like it even more.

[peterm15]

exactly what i was thinking... looks great... the real question is which one do you like better

[bighillreptiles]

hay looks good Adam did I not tell ya that it would look good with a faded snake in the back ground

[wiseman001]

DO U have that web site?

[Bartman]

lol not yet. Ive got one made and its just sitting in "storage" for use when I need it. That domain isnt taken so that shouldnt be a prob but I could use a variety of different domain names.

Thanks peter

Thanks Paul, I still havnt put the ball in the back instead but I think it will look better with a BP. If ive got time tomorrow ill try it out

Thanks for the replies everyone!

[peterm15]

if you type iit in a yahoo search you do get a bartman reptiles site heres the link as long as no one minds me putting it up.. if so just let me know and ill delete it....

http://www.geocities.com/bartmansreptiles/1homepage.html

[Bartman]

lol thats the one I made a very long time ago...I was looking to create a site that offers custom made tanks and reptile supplies but the market wasnt their and we couldnt compete with prices so it was a no go. Funny that its up their..heres my new temporary site.

www.geocities.com/bartmanreptiles

It will most likely shut down quite quick from the very low bandwidth

[oscar]

i think you need to lighten it up even more. the first set, i couldnt even see the python. the second post, i did see, but any printer will have an incredible difficult time trying to pull that image from all that ink. you need more contrast. the overall design i think is great.

i know yo ucost wont be a factor, but be prepared to spend a pretty penny on them.. full color graphics on heavy stock can be really expensive.

[Bartman]

I have no experience with printing, what do you think they'll run each?

Ill only give them to special people :D

[oscar]

depends on the quantity you order..

after that.... i have no idea. :p