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BAZ
04-29-04, 10:26 AM
I had a short dream which triggered this thought so I wrote it down. just thought I would share it.


My Dream
I'm standing here facing you as the water pours down on us. The steam building around us. You press yourself against me and I close my eyes.

I feel this rain falling washing away our sins... the sins of our past... the sins we are about to commit.

Your hands search my back feeling the scars I have collected over time... searching for the one you put there. Can't find it can you? You won't. It feels like the back of a crocodile.

When I Woke Up
I don't feel pain like I should.
I have been cut deep many times but when it happens it feels like a scratch. When I look down I realise how deep it really is. But I always heal. But healing leaves these scars. Scars make sure you never forget. Scars are lessons learnt... hopefully.

Did you know that crocodiles and alligators have such an amazing immune system that in the wild they lose limbs and parts of their tail in battles yet still survive and thrive! If they lose a leg they can stop the flow of blood to that area to prevent themselves from bleeding to death. They were made to survive and they have since the time of the dinosaurs. I understand and realise my closeness to them even more now.

The mating of crocodiles is beautiful. The male calls the female and when she arrives he swims under her and gently blows bubbles under her body until she is ready. They guard their eggs and young with their life. Taking care of their young for up to 4 years until they are big enough to handle most predators.

See.. we are not just cold blooded reptiles with no feelings even though it might seem that way at first.

Invictus
04-29-04, 10:58 AM
What can I say... that's deep, man. :)

JimmyDavid
04-29-04, 11:28 AM
Yeah, but can they resist the coils of the python?;)

BAZ
04-29-04, 01:30 PM
Been writing a lot lately.. dunno if this is the place to post it tho.. I posted this one coz of the croc analogy :P

susan
04-29-04, 01:38 PM
that was great! ever do lyrics?

brig
04-29-04, 01:43 PM
Baz, this is cool.
I've been writing a lot too - life got turned upside down last year, and I'm writing it out of my system. I dream a hell of a lot as well, and remember really fine detail, so I often write that down too.
I can identify where you're coming from. I don't know if this is or isn't the right place for too much of this stuff, but I for one appreciate these diversions...
cheers,
Briggy :)

BAZ
04-29-04, 01:45 PM
:) never written lyrics. But after I wrote this I realised the girl in the dream represented life (no it wasnt a dirty dream! hahaha)

ReneeB
04-29-04, 02:53 PM
*tears* Baz that's so.. wow.. now I wonder what else you've got hidden in there..

Stockwell
04-29-04, 03:28 PM
Baz,you need to get out more.
Last time I blew bubbles under the body of a female she jumped out of the hot tub, and that certainly "stopped the flow of blood to that area"

Sorry ,I couldn't resist :)

BAZ
04-29-04, 03:33 PM
LOL! I bet the Jacuzzi turned off as soon as u got out.. then realised it wasnt a jacuzzi.. just the chilli from the night b4 :P lol