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Dino
03-12-03, 08:13 PM
This is a toon that I have done for Kawartha Turtle Trauma Centre, and I was wondering if I could get some feed back!

Thanks in advance guys!
Dino
http://www.ssnakess.com/photopost/data/3043/355turtle_edit-med.jpg
reptilez
03-12-03, 08:14 PM
Its a good drwing, but i dont get the joke;sorry
Pixie
03-12-03, 08:16 PM
His shell is broken!!!

Good cartoon Dino, but you might want to make the cracked shell show a little more.

Great work!
Pixie
reptilez
03-12-03, 08:17 PM
Oh i see it now,
lol, my bad, guess i didnt look hard enough:D
BoidKeeper
03-12-03, 08:18 PM
Good cartoon Dino, but you might want to make the cracked shell show a little more.
Yup
Great work though!
Cheers,
Trevor
Lisa
03-12-03, 08:22 PM
Looks good to me. maybe put his leg in a cast or show more of the shell with bandages on it...
Dino
03-12-03, 08:23 PM
The crack is something I added after, just cause..

If it is associated with the Trauma Centre do you thing it would make more sense?....know what I mean? Posted at there site or in print!

Thanks for the constructive criticism everyone! and your quick replys

Thanks
Dino

P.S. Good Idea Lisa, maybe a couple of bandaids!
HeatherRose
03-12-03, 08:25 PM
it's great and it works ;)

awesome toon Dino :D

Heather :D
reptilesalonica
03-12-03, 08:34 PM
It's great Dino. Congratulations. But you must make more of the "broken" shell. Or put little arrows lol.
Matt
03-12-03, 08:46 PM
dino, great cartoon!
i dont think you need to add anything...i think its better if you dont add more cracks...just gonna over do it.
nice work!
The Midgenator
03-12-03, 09:07 PM
dose any one know eclypseboy
Swampwalker
03-13-03, 01:29 AM
Thank you very much Dino, it looks great. It will work really well in the Kawartha Turtle Trauma Centre (http://www.kawarthaturtle.org) Newsletter. Its exactly what I was looking for. Keep up the great work.
RachelS.
03-13-03, 01:36 AM
I like the leg cast idea. But it looks great Dino! I love your drawings!!
Jeromerules
03-13-03, 02:04 AM
Looks great man. keep it like it is. I think it's awesome. I do like the leg cast idea too but hey it's still awesome either way.
Jeff Hathaway
03-13-03, 07:07 AM
I'd make a more noticeable crack in the plastron. Depending on the size it is reproduced at, the existing cracks will not be very noticeable.

Great work, though!

Jeff Hathaway
Sciensational Sssnakes!!
Alicewave
03-13-03, 07:36 AM
I like the cast Idea too, looks great otherwise!
Nanashi04
03-13-03, 08:58 AM
^^ I think it's good, and that it'll work really well with the Trama center... :)
Dino
03-13-03, 09:48 AM
Thanks A Bunch.

You guys and gals are great and thanks for all your opinions! I will play around with some of your Ideas and see what I come up with.

Much appreciated!
Dino